Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.  

Hello there,
just submitted my design thought according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

Sir
I submitted my design and hope you like it and give me 4/5 star ratting but If you don’t like my entries kindly left me without star instant of low star(1/2/3).
Because I spend a lot of time for your design.