Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
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Hi there,

I have just submitted my entries for your brand identity. I have 2 concepts in my mind. so I decided to work on both. I will be glad if you provide reviews ratings on my work. I wish you all the best for this project.

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Manish Kumar
Graphic Designer | UI Designer | Illustrator