Hi, I submitted an entry, please review design (#25627999) and please provide direct feedback on my entry, hope to hear your feedback. Thank you!

Please take a look at my submissions - #25628021 #25628022
and provide your valuable feedback and comment on the draft submitted.
If you have any questions regarding the concept, please feel free to leave me a message.
Any suggested changes like font, color, etc. can be revised according to your needs.
If you like this type of design, I can continue with the versions and colors

Regards,
Boris

Hi, added some revisions please review design (#25633490) and looking forward to hear your comments on that one. Thanks!