feedback please on design 25281956 and 25281957 , thanks

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

Please leave some feedback to improve my design (#25288577). Thank you.

Hi,

Kindly review my design submission.
Your feedback will be of great help.
Thanks