feedback please on my design #25265959 ,#25265960 thanks

Hi, thank you for the ratings. Could you supply a little feed back on #25267659 and let me know what you DON'T like about the design so I can make adjustments. Much appreciated.

If you don't like this design, leave it with ZERO stars. Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas. Thank you for your understanding

Hello respected project owner, first let me thank you for inviting me to be the part of your project, I have designed some logo options as per your requirements, please have a look at my entries #25309523, #25309524 & #25309526 and let me know your feedback. Thank you :)