please check my design (#24862567)

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

what a great project to work on, sir it was an honor designing the logo of your company, please have a look and let me know if you have any revisions on the design, I'll be more than happy to help you, best regards.