Hi, Feedback Design(#24743918), please.:)

Please provide feedback on my design.

Feedback please design my shipment
# 24773413, # 24773377, # 24775843, # 24775596, # 24773501, thank you

sorry I gave the wrong message to another message to the owner of another logo.
this is my message:
Feedback please design my shipment
# 24781878
# 24781729
thank you