Hello sir, please check my design( #24609213 , #24609212) . kindly give me the feedback..Thank you

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track. If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving 1 or 2 star rating.

Best.

Dear CH,
If you want any changes of my design please inform me
Thank you :)

Hi, any updates?

Dear CH,
If you want any changes of my design please inform me
Thank you