feedback please , on my submission design 24068112 and 24068113 , regards

Hi there
Please check my design and do not hesitate for any change.
Regards.

Hello project owner,
I'm very interested in your project and I have some great ideas in my mind. Can you please send me an invitation to your project.
Here how you do it, please visit the link below:
https://www.designcrowd.com/help/article/can-i-invite-designers-to-my-project