Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks. 

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #24008213, #24008214, #24008215, #24008216.
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.

(#24011727)
Please check my design, it's my honor to receive your feedback