I have submitted a design (#23871428). Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Hi
please check my design #23878405 #23878406
feedback please

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HDart did you take your design down

Hello, Sir.
I sent the design according to your brief,
Glad to get your feedback

Thanks
Regards

sir, please see this logo #23877997 . this is 100% orginal creative logo .
that’s way , if you need any change send me a feedback please .