Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hello , please give me some feedback on #23759110-111

Hello,

You've rated my submission (#23730426) and according to the rating given, since you gave no comment, may I ask is there anything I can do to get it closer to what you need?

Best regards.

Thanks for rating me high star, if you need any change or choose me as the winner, it's my honor to serve you