Hi there,
I Submitted my ideas, please review

Respected Sir/Madam,
I have submitted my work,I hope you like it.
I have incorporated a skeleton with a guitar, beer and barbecue (including other elements would have made the design more complex and less appealing, but that can also be included).
Please go through it once and tell me if it is worth your company's prestige.
The colors and the font in the design can be changed.
Please, also kindly tell me my shortcomings, if any?
As it will help me in improving my future work.
THANK YOU.

Respected Sir,
If you don't like my design, please just eliminate it rather than give it 1-3 stars.
THANK YOU.