Feedback please

Hi kindly see my design #23302627 please.
Thank you.

Hello.
I'd love to hear your feedback on my submission number #23303207.
If you need some changes or want to add certain element in my designs, I'd gladly to finesse it to suit your taste and toward your target market.

Regards - Osllath

Hello, thank you very much for the highstars rate on 2 of my submissions. i'd love to hear your brief feedback on my other submission which i already provided with mockup for the logo.

Regards - Osllath