Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hello Andrew ...
Thanks for your invitation,

would you please let me know the meaning of the word (Tuburan), is it just a name?
your quick answer will be very helpful and appreciated
Thanks
Shaza

Hello this is my entry for the contest,
i hope you like it.
Just let me know if theres anything that wanna be changed/edited.