Please Feedback on my Design 22557562. Thank you so much

hi, please check my designs and give the feedback for me.
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i hope you like it, thank you :)

Hello, please check the design of my logo and give good feedback. if you want a change I'm ready to help.

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Hello CH, can you please give my design a feedback? If you don't want it please don't give it 1-3 stars. Just leave the design or eliminate it in this contest. Thank you :)