feedback pls

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #22492509.,#22492510., #22492511., #22492512., #22492577..

thanks and regards.

#22520365 logo artwork any changes i am waiting your valuable feedback

please give your feedback about mine #22527390

please also give feedback for #22527579

Hello there,
please, i'm waiting for some feedback so i can improve on a new option.

best regards :D