Could I get feedback on my first design to see if I should continue with this project? (#22245665)

I have posted another submission and would appreciate if I could get some more feedback! (#22251997)

Dear Contest holder! Please extend the project deadline a little bit, I'm received the invitation just now, I need some time to create an appropriate logo design.

We extended the project but I do not see a design from you yet, if you wish to submit please do so in the next 24 hours as we are about to close. Thanks

Sorry for being late, I will upload in the next 12 hours.