offer is embarrassing!

feedback plz

Hello, please check the design of my logo and give good feedback. if you want a change I'm ready to help.

Please feedback me .
I will give you alternate design. . .

Hello there,
Feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

Hello,
I have sent several logo designs for your company.
Can you check it?
Give me feedback.
Thank you very much.
Your answers and replies are very respectful
GBU.