Hello! I'd love to hear your feedback on my submissions. Thanks!

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

If you love my design please send me feedback
My design :
#21873338

Submitted revisions focused on the details mentioned in the feedback and would love to hear if that is the direction you were suggesting.

feedback please. on my submission design 21935483 ,21935484 and 21935485 . thanks

feedback please. on my submission design #21902587 . thanks

feedback on entry #21947655

please check my entry before selecting the winner #21947741.

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