Hi there,

Please provide your feedback on my design concept.

Thanks & Kind Regards,
Design Nation.

We like the gold and black version primarily because "rimming sugar" and "spun paradise" are both clearly visible. "Rimming sugar" and "paradise" get lost on the purple and yellow version with the white background and particularly so when we put this on a kraft colored package. Can you change the yellow color to a different color?

I like the olive and straw, but I would like to see a variation with some sparkle in its place. A large one on the rim and a few smaller around it. Something like the top row of the image here;

[Non image link removed]

Hopefully this link works better

https://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/l-%C3%A9toile-miroite-ensemble-scintillant-de-vecteur-scintillement-119319820.jpg

Thanks for the feedback. I've just sent you the revised version and the original version with two color combinations.

Let me know how they look.

Thanks,
Design Nation.

Please share the feedback on the designs I sent so I can modify them as per your likeness

Tolong berikan saya umpan balik #21817534 karena itu sangat berharga bagi saya, Terimakasih . Salam hangat