feedback on my submissions

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks on #21727488 so that I can improve my design .Your feedback is extremely valuable for us to create some thing which you like the most. If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most .

I have attached modern logo style. Please give your feedback for the logo design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Kindly provide a feedback of my work (#21773661) and let me know if you´d like any changes