feedback please...

Please check my design #21550490, #21550422

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #21552112, #21552113, #21552114, #21552115, #21552116..

thanks and regards..

Sir please check my design #21559922.. Hope you will like it..If you need any change please let me know.

Thanks n Regards

I have uploaded my design #21557531 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?
Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.