HI, Could you please give me some feedback on my design. It is early but I want to know if you like the direction I am going for. Please try to let me know where I went wrong with the design so I can make a new design or change this one. Thanks!

hello,
i'm working on some concepts will submit soonest.

Hi Contard,

I hope all is well. I was just wondering if you have made a decision on the project.

Thank you,

Raymond