check my design and let me know if you have any feedback

please check and send me your thoughts . If you think you have another design in mind you can explain me and we can re try again.

hat do you think ? If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?