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Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

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please check my design, #20925658....#20925659..

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Dear Project Owner,
Kindly check my design and feel free to ask for any amends.
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Hi, I would really appreciate if you leave a feedback for my submission?
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Hi,
Check out and provide your feedback on my design #20971015

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I have sent the logo concept according to your brief, don't hesitate to give feedback to the design that I have made :)
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