feedback please (#20672442) thanks

Hi,

Please provide your feedback on my design proposal.

Thanks,
DGrafix.

Hello, Project Owner.
I just submitted my design.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible Comment on my design would be muchly appreciated.

Regards,
Symbolman.

please check my new design