check my design and let me know if you have any feedback

hi, please check my designs and give the feedback for me.
my submissions is :
#20631562
#20631563
#20631565
#20631566
#20631567

i hope you like it.
thank you :)

Hello contest holder,

Merry Christmas. I have uploaded my design #20630716 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?
Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

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