feedback please...

sir please check #20545210 and #20545211

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20533806 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?
Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

Feedback Please

Dear sir,
please check my design #20561756 and provide valuable feedback, thank you.

Hi, I have submitted a logo, looking forward to your feedback for my submission.
#20569753
Any suggestions would be helpful in finding the perfect design for you.
Thanks.

hello sir, i'm waiting for your feedback :)
#20565997

Any feedback on #20533806 ?