check my design #20256880 and #20256881, regards

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Hello Project Owner,

Waiting for your valuable feedback.

Thanks

Please check sir i uploaded two new design. Thank you

Hello there ! Any changes you may suggest,Hope u may get the right one for your contest.Thank you.

still not like ?
Did you check my last design Options ? what do you think ? If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Give me another chance .

what exactly you are looking for can you explain once more ?