Hello there! I just submitted my entry today and carefully crafted my submission, Please do check design (#20111812), I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks!

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Feedback please on my design no #20107497 thank you

Sir please check my design

Hello Project Owner,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible comment on my design would be much appreciated.
Thanks & regards,
Slant Line Media

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