please check the design and sent your feedback

Hello,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
Thank you

I want to thank you all for your submissions. I am overwhelmed by the number of ideas to choose from and so moving forward if I give you no comment in a 12 hour period it is because I do not like the design. I will try to leave feedback if I feel it is in the ballpark but I will not if it is not at all to my liking. I am very SERIOUS about wanting a logo that is not generic or corporate, one that is memorable and very much want one that communicates what my company does if possible. I updated the brief to show what I mean.

Thank you for your submission--it is more generic than I am looking for. Other designers are closer to what I have in mind.

Thank you all for your work!!! I have picked a great logo --but you all made it really hard to choose!