feedback please #19310710, regards

feedback please ,design #19311252 and #19311253 ,regards

Feedback please.

Please Feedback me on my new submisison

Hello,Thank you for your invitation.
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions.
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/19375079
Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?