feedback please #19265539 and #19265540 regards

Hi There,

I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.

Thank You.

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?