Feedback please.

feedback please , on my design #18332467 and #18332468 .rgeards

Hello there, thanks for considering and I'm sure you will be doing great here.

Submitted a carefully worked, sophisticated concept and would love to hear on it.

Best Regards,

Hello,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
Thank you.

Thank you for your submission, it's not what were looking for.

Thank you for your submission, it's not what we're looking for.