Can you provide me a feedback, thanks :)

Can you provide me a feedback, thanks :)

Only feedback i have is the text and overall linework worry be for things like embroidery on a shirt. I want a logo that has clean clear text that will be easy to read and identify.
I like the creativity of this logo but need it to be a little less delicate and have a little bit of a bolder feel.

Little suggestion, more bolder, visible, and motives are ok and interesting?

yes, bolder lines and text. I like the overall feel of it. Just something that can be seen easily without to much distraction away from the text.
thanks,