Please Send me some Feedback on my design . please help me to improve my design

Please Send me some Feedback on my design . please help me to improve my design

Hi, I really like some of the designs that are coming through. Whilst we do not wish to change the identity of our brand, we want a contemporary FUN and FANTASY feel. Think Christmas Elf, Think Reindeer, Think Candy Canes, Santa, Christmas Stockings, think Snowman. Look forward to seeing some more designs, thanks so much.