Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design ? If you have something else in mind help me and write me that so I can come up with complete new versions . Please check my portfolio and profile and see what I can do for you .

With regards
Kim.

Hello,
Sir/Madam,

I’ve submitted four samples with keeping your suggestion in my mind. Please take a look on the samples that I gave you and please send me feedback about your decision of the samples.
Thanks &regards