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feedback please

Hi . Logo design has been submitted . I'm looking forward for your valuable feedback for improvements.
Thank you and God bless.

Regards,
Gr4pika

Hi, I have submitted a logo, can you please check and please provide me your feedback.
Design #13720614.

Thank you.

Your suggetions and feedback is verry much imp so i can improve my design ? If you want complete redesign help me and

brief me that so i can come up with complete new concepts .