Please check my submissions and give your valuable feedback.
Thanks a lot.

Feedback please.

So I lost this one? Didn't you give the comment saying it was the best so far?

It really came down to two. Yours was one of them.

We had a gathering last night for my sons birthday. I had a shortlist of 5. I got all of the adults to individually rank them and used them as a focus group. When tallied up there was 1 clear winner which was the other one I thought was extremely strong.

I appreciate your effort.

Kind regards

A.S.