Hello,
Thank you for your invitation. I've submitted a design and am hoping you could take a moment to let me know if i'm on the right track? Any feedback is most appreciated and indescribably helpful, really anything. Likes, dislikes etc. Otherwise any revisions i make/submit would be more or less a shot in the dark to figure out how to improve or change or even scrap it and start over. I do hope to hear back from you and I appreciate your time in reading this.

Thank You,
All the Best.
HJ