Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Hello. Dear sir.
could you provide us any feedback please? If you have any questions please let us know. We are ready to make your request. We look forward to your response.
Thank you.

can you please provide me your honest feedback regarding my designs ?
If any changes please feel free .
Regards