Feedback please.

Your design has a professional appeal but i need it to appeal to a young market. Needs to be a bit more funky. I have updated the brief. Can be a pictorial logo but do not want the picture to dominate the words. "a style that appeals to online music lovers. Some sort of graffiti style design. Must have a funky appeal to a young urban market. Needs to be professional as it will be the first thing most young customers see when they visit the website to buy Streetwear clothing. Can be a pictorial logo but the picture can not overtake the words." Thanks again.