Business Card Design Project
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Dear Sir!
I submitted design for card. Will you be giving any feedback?
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Here is some feedback outlining my toughts so far.
the front runners are
1) asimali.....nivce layout however, the dark side ''shadow text'' i am not so keen on, perhaps
a differnet texture ?
1) unwanted....the layout is good but it might be a bit too ''grey''. perhaps some
texture and/or change to a light colour on the text side ?
1) dirtyxmoney.....strong design, did you think of combinig your two submissions into one and
having grey on the back and white where the text info will read better.
the blue text on the dark blue might be hard to read?
i like a little texture but is this a little much ? might it seem glitzy ?
note i dont say 1,2,3....as they are not in any order of preference.
Tero, since you asked the question , i think there is too much going on in your design, with too much colour.
I am a little surprised, that more did not use the ''we can bring yur website to life'' as a simple message on one side, perhaps i might go as far as to add ''Live customer support online'' on the other side, as long as it didnt get too crowded ? i do think it could benefit from some way of explaining what we do as it may not be clear to all from the name alone. but only if there is not text everywhere ?
also in the interest of ''less is more'' i think we could leave off the fax number as there is too much info and nobody uses fax anymore.
Thanks to all for the designs, i will make the project guranteed tonight and will pick a winner on friday.
so i gues there is time for revsions ?
Regards,
David
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