Could you provide feedback for my design, so that I could know if i need to change something or is it not the kind of design you desire? Thank you.

Hi, Project Owner! I have submitted a design for you. Please kindly review my design. And if possible, please do leave some feedback and suggestions on the design as it will be highly appreciated. Thank you so much :)
Have a great day ahead.- Hana M.

Feedback please.

Any updates?

No I just selected one of your designs as the winner and I believe am waiting on handover of files. Thank you for your hard work.