good day to you project owner, could you review my entry when you get a chance? thank you

Are there any changes needed?

Hi please leave feedback in private message, and please let me know if I am on right track or no. Regards B

Hi B. Tiberi,
Thanks for sending a proposal. I liked the idea of heart and hand, but somewhat I feel it reminds me more the environment of a hospital or heart institute. Maybe you can try to mix something with the letters SIM or recreate the heart and hand in a different perspective.

could i possibly get feedback on my revision please?

hi, please give your feedback on my submissions, feel free to suggest changes/modifications,

thank you!

feedback please. thanks