Feedback please.

Hi designers. thank you for your efforts so far. I've come across another example of a logo design I like. See link for logo for Growth Mantra: [Non image link removed]it's this kind of design I'm looking for. I don't want a copy though!

I have submitted my first proposal for your logo, so any feedback will be welcoming.

Best Regards,
Black Graphic

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