Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

HI any suggestions or message for me

Sir any feedback please?? am waiting for your feedback??

Thanks for your design - it is in my top three and I'm currently gathering feedback from others. I will let you know my decision as soon as possible.