Feedback please.

Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Hi,..
Thanks to invite :)
Still need submission? :D

Please feel free to view my portfolio to get a feel for my designs,
and let me know if there is any particular design style that appeals to you.

Kindest Regards,
Jey

Hello,
Can I please have a feedback on my design?
Thank you very much