please have a look at my submissions and give me some feedback

I like where you are going! But its a little too playful. Please send some more concepts if you have them

Just submitted my entry, everything can still easily be modified to your preferences, and I'd be happy to get some feedback from you!

Thanks a lot for your consideration,
Jordy L.

Can you submit a new design?

Hi, have a good day.
are u angry with me of any reason? like u any design? ok, no prblm. i wait for u valuable decision. thanks.